On Richard Osman and his editors

So I’ve finally read them all, all four of Richard Osman‘s The Thursday Murder Club crime novels. Not in the order in which they were published, due to their availability in our public library (so that in the end I actually bought three of them). I do recommend reading them in their order of publication though, so first The Thursday Murder Club (2020) itself, as it presents the main characters, followed by The Man who Died Twice (2021), The Bullet that Missed (2022) and The Last Devil Today (2023). They probably could be read independently, but there is a continuing line of storytelling, and the final novel neatly and sadly wraps the whole series up.

As I wrote elsewhere on this blog, I find it impossible to read without a pencil, especially when I come across metalinguistic comments relating to prescriptivism (and this blog). And yes, I found them in Osman’s novels, too. On the who/whom issue in the very first of them, for instance, or on I/me and got for have in the last one I read (The Man who Died Twice).

The comments all make sense, as making linguistic corrections is in line with the character of Elizabeth, former MI5 agent, but reading the Acknowledgements (as I always do) made me think that something else is going on. In all except for the closing novel Osman pays thanks to his editors, Trevor Horwood (twice, for the first two) and Natalie Wall (for the third) for pointing out particular linguistic strictures to him and (presumably) making him correct his language accordingly:

  • … my copy-editor, Trevor Horwood, without who I would never know what days of the week certain dates were in 1971. Or, as Trevor would immediately point out, ‘without whom’ (p. 381)
  • Trevor, is it OK that I started a sentence with ‘And’ just now? Let me know. (p. 422)
  • Natalie is the first person ever to succinctly explain to me when I should be using ‘which’ and when I should be using ‘that’. It is a piece of information that I will always remember (p. 411)

That last comment makes me wonder whether Natalie Wall is perhaps American, even though she appears to have been part of the UK publishing team? See p. 420 of novel number 4, which, surprisingly at this stage, contains no linguistic thanks to his editors (I looked three times).

What does all this mean? To me it suggests that Osman was playing a linguistic game with his editors, who may have pointed out particular linguistic infelicities (I find it striking, for instance, to find what looks like a deliberate split infinitive in the acknowledgement to Natalie). It may even be the case that he put in particular covert metalinguistic comments in his novels, just to make the point that in his eyes such criticism was trivial. And that by the fourth novel he had tired of the game, and chose not to comment on the linguistic editing process any more.

There won’t be any more Thursday Murder Club crime novels, it seems, but the good news is that the series is being adapted into a Netflix film, with Helen Mirren being cast as Elizabeth, Pierce Brosnan as Ron,  Ben Kingsley as Ibrahim and Celia Imrie as Joyce. What a cast, and what a film to look forward to. Needless to say, I’ll watch with pencil and notebook at hand to see whether any of the metalinguistic comments made it into the script.

[Thank you Lyda, and Joan for confirming this, for commenting that “earlier this year Osman announced on FB that the series’ fifth book will be coming next year”. Will be hugely looking forward to it, and also to see if Richard Osman will continue to haggle with his editors over issues of prescriptivism.]

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HUGE 2.0, or …?

Filled with happy academic memories of the 7th Prescriptivism Conference organised by Linda Pillière and her team at the University of Aix Marseille towards the end of last month! The papers were all very interesting, the plenarists (Nuria Yañez-Bouza, Jane Hodson and Ian Cushing) very well chosen, and it was great to meet academic friends of long standing (in person once again) and to make new ones in the process. There are plans for publishing the proceedings (Multilingual Matters has already shown interest), and the next conference on the subject will be held in Brussels, to be organised by Rik Vosters and colleagues. Looking forward to it already!

One of the papers was particularly interesting from the perspective of the Bridging the Unbridgeable project. It only came on towards the end, so there was little time to exchange views and experiences, but it was fascinating to see how it drew on our HUGE database but dealt with styleguides rather than usage guides. These are text types which we took great care to distinguish in our project, not only because there are so many of them but also because they are expected to have exerted a different kind of influence on users and their language use. Style guides are used obligatorily, whereas usage guides are only consulted at the need of the individual user. There is nevertheless a great deal of overlap between them.

The style guide project is run by Holly Baker from Brigham Young University, and it owes a debt, she noted in her paper, to the HUGE database. It will also be freely accessible, she said and should already be available (if I remember correctly) by the end of next year. Her co-presenter at the conference was Liana Jankovich (not mentioned on the conference programme, but apparently a student from Brigham Young University as I found by googling her), who presented some preliminary results from an analysis of the use of metalangistic terms in the database. I expect considerable overlap with data on this subject from usage guides (see my book Describing Presciptivism, chapter 6) or from normative grammars from the eighteenth century, which is where the roots of prescriptivism can be found (see The Bishop’s Grammar, chapter 4). So I’ll be following this fascinating project with great interest!

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On who/whom in popular culture

Just out, I wrote earlier today, New Horizons in Prescriptivism Research, and in it there is an article I wrote on the exploitation of who/whom as a usage problem in popular culture: television series, films, popular novels. And here is another one, with as many as two references to the issue in Richard Osman’s novel The Thursday Murder Club (2020), once in the main text (“Who did what to who? Or is it, Whom did what to who? Either way …”, p. 237) and the second time in the Acknowledgements (a jab at the author’s copy-editor about correcting who/whom errors, p. 381). What is it with the who/whom issue? Is it a particular but within popular culture because people are insecure about what it should be? I’d have thought that nobody could be bothered about it any more, because our usage poll shows that who for whom is barely considered unacceptable any more. So what is going on here? (If you want to read more about the who/whom issue, have a look at my newly published paper.)

To be fair, there is one other usage problem in the book, on the use of me for I, which one of the characters, a sloppy police constable, is corrected for, five pages down from the who/whom comment (p. 242). Why only there? Or was the author havng it out with his copy-editor?

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Out now – another very interesting book on prescriptivism

Congratulations, editors Nuria Yañez-Bouza, María Esther Rodríguez-Gil and Javier Pérez-Guerra! You did a great job editing and publishing the proceedings of the 6th Prescriptivism conference held at Vigo in 2021. The book can now be ordered from Multilingual Matters, on whose website you’ll be able to find out more about the contents of this important contribution to the field of prescriptivism.

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Singular ‘they’ in Dutch?

“Will everyone put down their phone?” is quite common in English today. It has been around as a construction since at least the 14th century, developed into quite a controversial feature in the language, but as our Usage poll #10 shows, is barely considered unacceptable any more.

But today, for the first time, I spotted the construction in Dutch, used by a 16-year-old: “Iedereen heeft hun telefoon weg gelegd.” Is this the beginning of a new trend in Dutch? And should it indeed be marked as a mistake? The context is relatively informal. Comments, please?

Source: Dutch Facebook post.

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“Inputted” on the increase?

On reading a PhD thesis from the University of Sheffield on the phonology of West Cornwall English (excellent data collection, detailed and very meticulous methodology description) I encountered the word inputted, which set me thinking. The context was very clearly past, so to my mind input would have done the job. This made me wondering if perhaps the form overtly marked for past tense might be on the increase today?

A good tool to check this is the Google n-gram viewer, which provides written data across time that can be separated to see what is going on in British and American English. The data showed that very different processes are going on within these two varieties:

Two very different patterns. What would explain them? Any role played by prescriptivism here, with a stronger effect on American English? Further research would definitely be of interest!

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Soon coming out

New Horizons in Prescriptivism Research, edited by Nuria Yáñez‐Bouza, María E. Rodríguez‐Gil and Javier Pérez‐Guerra, will by published by Multilingual Matters in the Spring. Congratulations, editors! Looking forward to seeing the book in print soon! Further details here.

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Using HUGE in your research

Over the past few years, quite a few scholars have requested access to our HUGE database. We are always happy to do so, and usually ask them to let us know how they made use of the database in their research. Today, an article came in that did so, and this led to a page in this blog’s banner that keeps track of such publications. Also to encourage other scholars to tell us about their publications!

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7th Prescriptivism conference

The seventh edition of this wonderful conference series will take place from 26 to 28 June 2024 in Aix en Provence, in France. Plenary speakers will be Ian Cushing (Manchester Metropolitan University, UK), Jane Hodson (University of Sheffield, UK) and Nuria Yáñez-Bouza (University of Vigo, Spain).

This edition’s topic will be Transmitting Prescriptivism and Norms, and the deadline for submitting abstracts is 15 January 2024. For more details, see the conference website.

Looking forward to another great conference on prescriptivism!

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Tryna into the OED?

Rereading Salinger’s The Catcher in the Rye (1951) this summer reminded me of one of the last BA theses I supervised before I retired nearly three years ago. The student writing the thesis was analysing twitter messages, and told me he was hoping to come across tryna in his data. Tryna? He said it was a common form on social media platforms, meaning “trying to”. It was all new to me.

Not so as it happens, for I actually would have come across it when I first read The Catcher in the Rye some time during the mid-1970s, only at the time it probably didn’t strike me as a form worth noticing. Nor did it when I reread the novel ten years later for a paper I wrote for a retiring colleague’s Festschrift. I’ve reproduced the paper elsewhere on this blog.

Third time lucky, it seems: tryna I now noticed occurring several times in the novel, as on p. 50 of my Penguin copy: “I was tryna sleep before you guys started making all that noise.” This is not the main character, Holden Caulfield, speaking, but his roommate. Another instance in the novel is highlighted by Jane Hodson in her book Dialect in Film & Literature (2014: 100), where she comments on the sociolinguistic contrast between Holden’s use of trying to and the pimp’s response: “Nobody’s tryna chisel nobody.” So in writing, even though it reflects fictional speech, the word is at least some 75 years old. But it has no entry in the OED. Should it have? I’m interested to hear what readers of this blog think.

Doing a Google Ngram check confirms that the word was in (written) use already during the 1950s, with an interesting bleep at the time for British English. Could this have been a Catcher-in-the-Rye effect? The graph also shows a steep rise for British English since the 2000s (top), but a decline for American English setting in about ten years ago (bottom). What is going on here, I wonder? Any thoughts?

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